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A young girl is kept alone in a large room. She kneels on the floor, peeking out from the tiny gap of the dark curtains. It may just be the most beautiful day she has ever seen. The warm rays of the sun bathe the multicolored garden. The birds sing, perched on gently swaying tree branches. And her siblings run and laugh as they play. She wished she could join them, but she cannot.
She hears the sound of heavy feet stomping rhythmically toward her bedroom. She immediately yanks the curtains close and hurries toward the mahogany chair in the center of the room. She sits primly, a cold expression replaces the gentle smile that was once on her face. She holds her breath for ten agonizingly long seconds, waiting for the person to enter. She sighs in relief, however, when the footfalls get softer. Whoever it was must have just walked through the wrong halls. And so she carefully walks toward the sealed window and peeps out once again.
She has never felt the rays of the sun on her fair skin. Nor has the cold breeze ever blown passed her long curls. She has never played through the flowers with her many siblings. Her world is different. It is the four tan walls of her bedroom and the tiny, perpetually closed window with black curtains. Cuffs on her wrists and ankles bind her to this limited world. She knows that she will be released one day in the future, and she anticipates this with a mix of joy and fear.
For when the chains are cut and she exits the dark bedroom, she will only be a body to be buried.
She hears the sound of heavy feet stomping rhythmically toward her bedroom. She immediately yanks the curtains close and hurries toward the mahogany chair in the center of the room. She sits primly, a cold expression replaces the gentle smile that was once on her face. She holds her breath for ten agonizingly long seconds, waiting for the person to enter. She sighs in relief, however, when the footfalls get softer. Whoever it was must have just walked through the wrong halls. And so she carefully walks toward the sealed window and peeps out once again.
She has never felt the rays of the sun on her fair skin. Nor has the cold breeze ever blown passed her long curls. She has never played through the flowers with her many siblings. Her world is different. It is the four tan walls of her bedroom and the tiny, perpetually closed window with black curtains. Cuffs on her wrists and ankles bind her to this limited world. She knows that she will be released one day in the future, and she anticipates this with a mix of joy and fear.
For when the chains are cut and she exits the dark bedroom, she will only be a body to be buried.
Literature
QUERO
Eu Quero as tatuagens
as histórias e viajens
as aventuras com os amigos
Quero amores correspondidos
Quero um lugar para chamar de casa
e que tenha "a minha cara"
Quero mudar de opinião
aprender a dizer não
e também não precisar me desculpar
apenas por ser eu
Quero ser segura, me sentir madura
fazer escolhas sem pensar
me jogar no acaso
ter casos e mais casos
com diferentes cidades
com as quais sei,
que irei me apaixonar
Quero línguas novas
e "nossas" histórias
sobre lugares longínquos
e pequenos labirintos
onde nossas mentes irão vagar
Quero me sentir amada,
pela natureza, pelo luar,
pe
Literature
My Novel again
Chapter 2
The open steppes to the south are a place of great dangers, concealing them within tall grasses and large outcroppings of rocks. Mitzpah, the only daughter of the Great Chief Ordan stalked human prey. Moving quietly through the eight foot tall grass she came to the edge of a small camp, her leather armor blending well with the evening shadows. Within the camp six armed men divided the spoils of their latest exploits unaware of their hunter. She slid her right hand to the tattoo of a hawk on her left arm and whispered a quiet prayer, Great Selger, guardian of my people, guide our spears and let them strike true.
She dipped he
Literature
Write-a-Novel Exercise 1.2
Disclaimer
The following is a typed out version of chapter 1 “Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone” by J.K. Rowling. This is not an original piece of work but a one-page excerpt typed out, by hand, for the purpose of commentary and education. I am not trying to “improve” the original text, only learn about writing by altering it for different effects and to learn the techniques that Rowling masters so well.
Chapter one - Original version
Nothing like this man had ever been seen on Privet Drive. He was tall, thin, and very old, judging by the silver of his hair and beard, which were both long enough to tuck into
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Okay, I originally wrote this for my high school writing club back in junior year. I wasn't very satisfied with it back then and decided it would be fun to try rewriting it now. I would really like to hear what you think about this piece because I still feel like I'm still missing something. Oh, this is my first literature submission of the year... wheeeeee~
Okay, I originally wrote this for my high school writing club back in junior year. I wasn't very satisfied with it back then and decided it would be fun to try rewriting it now. I would really like to hear what you think about this piece because I still feel like I'm still missing something. Oh, this is my first literature submission of the year... wheeeeee~
(And, yes. As usual, I'm supposed to be doing schoolwork of some kind.)
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Oooh, so melancholic and suspenseful! I love everything about this; my only suggestion is that you not repeat the pronoun "she" so often. Even if we never learn the character's name, there are other words that can be used! Otherwise, all I have to say is: I hope we get more of this story!