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hannah poets
It’s occured to me -
only recently to be honest
that artists have an ability
Now I know artists have always had abilities
from hand drawn grenades to
the explosion of writing on a page.
But I finally noticed
looking at the rain
at a simple grocery store
That artists have the ability
to see past what people see.
they see the soul.
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xX Phase One Xx Chapter One
You know those days where you wake up and think, 'Today is going to be fricking great'? Yeah. This was one of those days.
A few minutes ago was probably the first time ever that I didn't mind waking up at six-thirty in the morning to go to the crappiest high school in Los Angelos. Deep Cover blasted from my 90s-style alarm clock, and I slapped it without breaking off the top for once. I never get tired of that song, even if I do hear the chorus pretty much every morning. Hard to believe that song came out almost 175 years ago.
I also realized that I really need a haircut. My blonde hair was starting to get in my eyes, which really annoys me
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SOS
I want to trust you,
but we both know I’ve been hurt before.
Maybe that shouldn’t be the basis
of my judging but when I’ve
always been left behind,
it seems my SOS is forever
falling short.
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Anomie: the lack of usual or ethical standards in an individual or group
Technically, I'm may not using it in the right context because I chose the title from a lesson in sociology class that related to explaining why people committed suicide. "Anomie" was just a term among all the others I learned then, but let's forgive me this time
Be careful how you treat people, okay?
So what do you think about the flow? I hope the sidestory-like blockquotes wasn't a distraction.
Technically, I'm may not using it in the right context because I chose the title from a lesson in sociology class that related to explaining why people committed suicide. "Anomie" was just a term among all the others I learned then, but let's forgive me this time
Be careful how you treat people, okay?So what do you think about the flow? I hope the sidestory-like blockquotes wasn't a distraction.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI admire your writing here, you showed the idea of suicide and bulying very creatively and with great sense for emotions.
I like that in your story, you wrote about both sides of the situation, bulying and ignoring and regret that comes later, but too late. This makes the story really emotional and sad and hopefully, also educational for those who act before realizing consequesces of their deeds.
Using da text edition effect here like this was good idea, I think that it makes good contrast between two points of view. I like this very visible division, I think that it suits the story more that only using normal text and italic.
Overall expression is great, I´m glad that I could read this story, however sad it was. You chose really great theme and you wrote about it well.